"Sven Littkowski" <sve### [at] jamaica-focuscom> wrote in message 
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> Please see here the current stage of my spcae carrier (which is more a 
> mobile base, actually).

Wow, I really like this.

A few comments:

The structure of the center part is a little difficult to make out - I think 
there should be some exterior ligths maybe?

Also, the white 'field lines?' in the tube part don't seem to cast any light 
on anything - not sure if that's on purpose or not, and it's not 'wrong' 
just something I noticed.  The buildings on the right hand side seem to 
'stick into' the white lines though.  If that's intentional, I would space 
them so it looks like it's on purpose.

A few of the windows on the very top part of the curve don't really seem to 
follow the greebles?  Not really sure about that as it's in shadow

I really like this, you've captured a great sense of complexity and size. 
The windows I feel are especially well done, that's one thing that makes it 
look *big*.

    == John ==

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