I agree with the other critiques and would add just a few of my own. Close 
the aperture of the focal blur a bit and move it where most of the 
foreground is in focus. I also have a problem with the books having too many 
color variances. They look just a little too fake with the yellows not too 
many books have those colors(afaik) but who I'm I to say? The lighting is 
not bad but( I guess you knew this was coming) I would like to see it darker 
in the background scene. I would add ambient 0 to global settings also (I 
find it helpful in getting lighting right). I also think that the other 
lampshades look a little odd. I think you could try tweaking the ambient on 
them that might bring them around. Rad settings are always tough to get. You 
can always try recursion_limit 2 or higher and tweak the grey_level abit . I 
do like your scene though . Please change the scale of the texture of the 
wood on the desk .
I hope this is helpful.
Later,
    Brent
"RobF" <nomail@nomail> wrote in message 
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> Hi,
>
> I'm looking for constructive criticism to improve this image.
> I'd like to improve the radiosity (currently using Radiosity_IndoorLQ), 
> but
> not clear on which settings to tweak.
>
> Thanks in advance,
>
> Rob.
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