I think you have a decent mech model there, but it's very obscured by poor
lighting and fog. Because of your light source's position, most of the model
is in shadow, and without radiosity that just makes it look like a dark
blob. Reconsider the primary light source's position, and then consider
adding a fill light and maybe a back light.

As far as the fog goes, the yellow color at the bottom is a little too
greenish IMO, and overall it desaturates your model a lot because it's in
the way. Maybe thin it out a little, or replace it with a more interesting
backround.

 - Slime
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