Slime wrote:
> In both of them, I'd like to see the camera brought closer and the viewing
> angle increased, to get the same image with more of a perspective effect.

Hmm...  I'd pulled the camera out much further than normal, and used a 
smaller viewing angle (15'), as I've noticed this gives a better 
impression of size when you're close up to an object.  However, the 
camera is no longer that close to the object, so I'll have to try that out.

> Overall, I like the first one better

Wait, do you mean the previous WIPs, or the first alternate (the night 
scene)?

> - the view is more interesting IMO -
> except that the radiator (thought it was a chair) and table poking into the
> bottom part of the image confuses my eyes a little. They feel cramped in
> there.

I know, and right now I'm just trying out alternate angles before I fix 
anything like that.


> As far as lighting goes, I prefer the first, but I think the harsh edges on
> the moon and jar need to be softened. The light from outside falling on the
> red brick confuses me; if the moon is visible, the light must be coming from
> something else - a street light, perhaps, but it doesn't make sense that
> it's coming from below.

Well, you're a few stories up, though I could put it on the ground floor 
and throw some trees outside...


> 
>  - Slime
>  [ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]
> 
> 

...Chambers

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