Slime nous apporta ses lumieres en ce 04/03/2006 03:24:
> In both of them, I'd like to see the camera brought closer and the viewing
> angle increased, to get the same image with more of a perspective effect.
> Overall, I like the first one better - the view is more interesting IMO -
> except that the radiator (thought it was a chair) and table poking into the
> bottom part of the image confuses my eyes a little. They feel cramped in
> there.
> 
> As far as lighting goes, I prefer the first, but I think the harsh edges on
> the moon and jar need to be softened. The light from outside falling on the
> red brick confuses me; if the moon is visible, the light must be coming from
> something else - a street light, perhaps, but it doesn't make sense that
> it's coming from below.
> 
>  - Slime
>  [ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]
> 
> 
You are on the second or third floor, so, you are higher than the street lamps.

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Alain
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