Very Nice, better than I've ever managed.

Thoughts (Picky Points).

the shadow on the building seems to be coming from a couple of individual 
leaves as opposed to whole trees, might be worth moving the light source 
further away.

the broken board on the front of the building is a really cool touch.  I'd 
suggest adding the same type of character to the hand-rail, perhaps a bit of 
sagging.

I think the posts supporting the walkway are a little too clean, you need to 
add some grubbyness.

The plants at the waters edge are well placed but they seem a little 
uniform.  Might be worth adding some reeds or tall grasses in amoungst them 
to break up the sameness.

the leaves on the trees above the flat roof look a little artificially 
coloured, is there an ambient setting there that needs to be zeroed out?

the bases of the trees on the right look cut-off.

Excellent water! Love the idea of seeing throught the building!

I'd like to see a bigger version.


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