"Jim Charter" <jrc### [at] msncom> schreef in bericht
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> Yes, I think you are taking it in the right direction.  I think adding
> more elements improves this picture.  Moving the balloon closer adds a
> lot.  Allows us to mentally "enter" the scene.  The waterfall is a great
> element but needs work yet I feel.  I question its placement.  Too close
> to the center of the composition and it cuts the cliff edge right next
> to where the moon cuts the cliff edge.  And I question its realness.  It
> really needs to suggest falling water in order to emphasize the sense of
> height of the cliff. I think there needs to be a sense of the water
> breaking up and vapourizing as it falls.  Where ever you put it, it is
> going to be an attention getting element in the scene and as such will
> need to be spot on.  I think the hazy clouds might be too much.  Maybe
> make them more of a hint?

Right on the spot, Jim!
I have not been too happy with the waterfall's location. I mainly did choose
it because it was a lower part of the cliff. However, it does not work well
with the moon here. And, indeed, it is too centrally placed. More work
needed here.
The clouds: I put them in to judge their effect. Still not what I would
like, though.

Thomas

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