Great improvements!
Something that bothers me a little: the lava underwater looks a little bit
too much like separate blobs of matter. I think they should be more
interconnected, forming a bumpy flow over overlapping blobs, but well-welded
together within the flow. A few more bright burstings, more in the
background would also improve that part of the scene, while increasing
perhaps somewhat the murkiness of the water.

Thomas

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