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Sylvain wrote:
> Thank you for your comments to my previous post and your help since my 'Go
> stones' some time ago.
> According to the remarks, I mainly changed my carpet, Victoria's position
> and the vase colour.
> This is my first "serious" scene using PoV and comments are, as always, more
> than welcome.
> Hope you will like it
> 
	Well, the vase is much better. OTOH, I preferred the other position
for Victoria.

	I like the idea of the rumpled carpet, but the way it is I get the
impression that whoever walked on it last went towards the left
whereas the go stones, the position of the door and my impression of
the picture overall all point to him leaving on the right...

		Jerome

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