"stm31415" <sam### [at] cscom> wrote in message 
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>I edit a school literary/art magazine, and this is this years cover. Yay
> heightfields! The water isn't perfect, but I'm not unhappy with it. Any
> thoughts?
>
> -S
> 5TF!
>

Nice concept!
I find the edge of the water disturbing. Its way too jaggy for the scale.
The edge should be smoothed out - water has more cohesion.
The shadows in the top portion suggest a sheet of water flying over the 
surface - not bonded to it.
The foam floating on the surface is nice. It gives it a sense of life.
It just that leading bleeding edge which is overdone.

DLM

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