Bill Hails nous apporta ses lumieres en ce 2005-02-21 12:01:
> "JWV" <jwv|at|planet.nl> wrote:
> 
> 
>>The background looks a bit flat, try adding an object in the water to give
>>it a sense of depth. Since it is a very peacefull picture at the moment, a
>>swan ( unsure about the spelling, i mean the large, white, swimming bird)
>>would be great.
>>
>>The rest looks great!
>>
>>Greetings,
>>
>>JWV
>>
> 
> 
> Hmm, yes, maybe, or a rotting tree stump, something like that, I
> feel a swan might detract too much from the main subject.
> 
> There is a slight fog that's supposed to impart distance, it may
> be a little too under played, and there are little flecks (discs)
> on the water foreground but they're not obvious without AA.
> 
> Thanks for your encouragement.
> 
I'd go for some lotus flowers or water lilys. A drifting tree branch, maybe with a few
leaves, could 
also be nice.
Great image, much improved.

Alain

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