"JWV" <jwv|at|planet.nl> wrote:

> The background looks a bit flat, try adding an object in the water to give
> it a sense of depth. Since it is a very peacefull picture at the moment, a
> swan ( unsure about the spelling, i mean the large, white, swimming bird)
> would be great.
> 
> The rest looks great!
> 
> Greetings,
> 
> JWV
> 

Hmm, yes, maybe, or a rotting tree stump, something like that, I
feel a swan might detract too much from the main subject.

There is a slight fog that's supposed to impart distance, it may
be a little too under played, and there are little flecks (discs)
on the water foreground but they're not obvious without AA.

Thanks for your encouragement.

-- 
Bill Hails
http://thyme.homelinux.net/

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