Stefan Viljoen nous apporta ses lumieres en ce 2005-02-16 10:22:
> Hi all,
> 
> A simple indoor scene depicting a part of my home's sitting room - still
> learning a lot about Pov as I go along.
> 
> Likes:
> 
> I think I got the carpet down pat.
> 
> Dislikes:
> 
> - Simplistic furniture models.
> - Hate the chairs' feet - a bit out of alignment as well.
> - Scene seems "empty" - lacking in spirit / complexity?
> - Something about the lighting is bothering me - supposed to be a bright
> early afternoon outside.
> 
> Anyway, a penny for your thoughts.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> 
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If the light is suposed to come only from a window, the shadows are way to bright: try
lowering your 
ambient value. Some missalignment of the furniture could realy improve the realism,
maybe some small 
random rotation around the y axis. The wood grain looks to large compared ti the size
of the 
furnitures, try scaling it down, maybe to 1/10 of it's present scale. Also, it's
orientation seems 
odd, unnatural for furnitures. Once the composition is finalised, try Slime's
suggestion about 
radiosity.
The edge of the white carpet is very good. I like your flowers.

Alain

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