Stefan Viljoen wrote:
> Hi all,
> 
> A simple indoor scene depicting a part of my home's sitting room - still
> learning a lot about Pov as I go along.
> 
> Likes:
> 
> I think I got the carpet down pat.
> 
> Dislikes:
> 
> - Simplistic furniture models.
> - Hate the chairs' feet - a bit out of alignment as well.
> - Scene seems "empty" - lacking in spirit / complexity?
> - Something about the lighting is bothering me - supposed to be a bright
> early afternoon outside.
> 
> Anyway, a penny for your thoughts.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> 
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> 
Looks like a lot of good work.  The furniture looks fine to me.  Far and 
away my main stopping point is the bright white wall.  It doesn't seem 
to recieve any shadow.  Also its features.  Is that a window showing a 
garden beyond?  But no window frame?

Minor note, the fruit bowl seems oddly scaled.

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