If you want it to be mysterious lift the letters out of the water so they 
float above it. They currently look like the tide is receding. The lighting 
is very flat and appears to originate near the view point, but does not 
interact with the water. Perhaps the letters need to be luminous. A pitch 
black sky with no stars does not help.
DLM

"Hershel Robinson" <her### [at] yahoocom> wrote in message 
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> This image is supposed to be letters floating over the water looking very
> mystical and mysterious. If you don't recognize them, they are Hebrew
> letters.
>
> Anyhow I am not happy with this image. The basic code was given to me (a
> few years ago) by someone with the initials JRG. I have since forgotten 
> who
> he is.
>
> If anyone can suggest any way to improve this image, I would be grateful.
>
> The code can be found here:
>
> http://galleryrobinson.com/shevisi.27.pov
>
> Thank you,
> Hershel Robinson
> Israel
>
>

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