Tim
That is an improvement!
I like the way the colors harmonize now.
And the placement of the birdhouse and barn with branch on axis is 
satifying.
The barn echoes the birdhouse and makes a story which goes beyond bird and 
cat.
The wilds on the left, the domestic on the right and the tension between 
them works well.
The moon has become superfluous - its a detail that doesn't hurt and doesn't 
help.
Its been a pleasure observing the creative process.
Well done.
DLM

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