> I don't think that seeing the man's face would add anything, maybe, just
> bend his head down a litle more... and also, lowering his harm like he's
> lacking the energy to rise it higher. For me, this is more about
> suggesting feelings than showing.

I liked the idea of his arm being not as much raised as it was. As for the
face, didn't lower it much more and it's showing a hint of outline, but just
subtle. Makes it noticeable that he's not looking after her.

Regards,
Tim

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