Tim Nikias v2.0 wrote:

> As always, comments and suggestions appreciated! :-)


Hi Tim. I've been watching the progress of this piece, and I have to say 
your second post was the best. It was in take #2 that you seemed to 
convey the man's sorrow more clearly.

Take #4 makes the man look angry, as if he's saying, "Go on, get outta 
here! I don't need you anyway!" Maybe if he beckoned to her with both 
hands out, with his palms facing upward slightly he would look more 
heartbroken? Another pose might be on one knee, with one of his hands 
over his face and another pleading for her return. But then he might 
look guilty of something....

-Samuel Benge

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