Tim Nikias v2.0 wrote:
> Perhaps a more advanced version will create more feedback... So, here I am
> now. Not yet sure if this isn't already the finished state, but that's it
> for today.
> 
> I'm thinking about removing the blue light off of the man, so that his
> silhouette is rather black vs the background, instead of the outlined
> version similiar to the woman.
> 
> What bugs me is the goodbye-wave the woman tosses at him whilst not looking,
> I'm not 100% sure that it has the correct effect. I'm still working on that,
> but maybe that's the best I can do when doing silhouettes.
> 
> Anyways, comments and suggestions appreciated,
> Tim
> 
> 
in the uk, if you try to 'advise' / 'moan' / 'correct' in someway a 
teenager, the resonse is usually "Whatever"

I wonder if you'd consider a title change as it seems to scream it.

now, if you added a mirror behind him reflecting just the smile on his 
face, it would certainly get intrigueing (sp?)

I would also suggest you shorten her left thumb, and put in a slight ( 
15-20 degree) elbow bend. You can put your arm in that position, reminds
me of a swimming strke gone awry.

stephen

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