> http://www.jimbobjim.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/gallery/stones.htm - so is this
> any better?

Two things I notice:

- In the old image, the focus was the stone circle. In this image, the focus
is the sunset. The rocks seem like a secondary element. Is that intended?

- The rocks rely too much on ambient lighting, so they look very flat. Try
adding a dim, shadowless light source behind the camera somewhere and off to
the left in order to give them some more depth.

 - Slime
 [ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]

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