IMHO the ambient on the trees and stone are not in accordance with what 
we can see in the path which is very dark where unlit. This makes them, 
especially the stone, quite akward.

The rest is really nicely designed though, I expect an imp to run across 
the road at anytime,

JC
PS: basically beeing a french speaker, I don't understand what the quote 
on the stone means ... is it a poem ?

Stefan Persson wrote:
> Very nice modelling :)
> Personally I would lose the stone. I think it destroys the picture
> and the rest of the scene already says what is written on the stone.
> Perhaps it looks to much like a head stone.
> Some of the leafs is too bright. I'm thinking of those in the
> shadows on the right side of the road.
> 
> All this IMHO ofcourse.
> 
> Like said before, very nice atmosphere. :)
> 
> /Stefan
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> "Darren Hewson" <dar### [at] hotmailcom> skrev i meddelandet
> news:3f87f1f0@news.povray.org...
> 
>>Probably the final render for this. The png version is here
>>http://darren.hewson.users.btopenworld.com/Horizon1280x1024_20030921.png
>>(2mb) if anyone wants to see it.
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>>Cheers
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