"JC (Exether)" <no### [at] spamfr> wrote in message
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> Very nice indeed. As you request for comments, here are mine:
> - You should definitely think about more realistic clouds, with a real
> volume and a dark bottom, like real clouds.

Still thinking about them...

> - I don't like the grainy aspect of the sea near the horizon, in real
> world you would have a heat fog hiding that, maybe you can try softening
> it with a thin ground fog so that the first plan sea remains clear.

I tried using some fog but couldn't get it to look right. I think the
graininess mostly comes from low quality blur settings (only 6 blur
samples).

> - I like the distant flock of birds and fish in the shadow ideas

Cool.

> - The butterflies seem to be all in the same position with wings open at

> (I'm not quite sure about this remark though, because the resolution is
> not high enough, maybe we need a closeup)

They are all at different angles, but like you say on this resolution that's
kinda hard to see.

Thanks for your comments.

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Tek
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