Definitely an improvement, though I miss
some more contrast on the hills, a darker
shadow. Don't know how that could be
achieved though. Are you using fog, or are
the hills that much washed out in color by
texturing?

I'd pick a more simplistic font for the
title in the lower right corner, but can't
tell which one. Just more pure, less small
edges and corners.

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> I made the clouds less dense, changed the hills and lighting and made
> many small adjustments, added some birds (post processed) and a black
> frame. I'm beginning to like the result. :)
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