I can't think of a concrete example, but I was thinking perhaps something
that showed a struggle.  In other words, it might have more of an impact if
the viewer could see some sort of struggle (to live/survive) going on within
the Worldbowl, while outside the Worldbowl, things are peaceful.  That may
be cliched, but it has more of an impact on me.  Life in the Worldbowl may
not be so great.

You haven't taken this path so far, so maybe that would be too drastic of a
change, and as always, I'm just offering ideas.  I think this is looking
quite nice.

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Slash

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