OK, yeah, this is a definite improvement!

It looks great. I mean, it looked great before, but now it's greater!

The stone wall is definitely much better - it looked "wrong" before. The
leaves don't hide the whole tree any more... The clouds are kinda subtle...
not sure whether more "realistic" ones would look worse or better...

Only a few real problems I can point out...
 * As someone else said, the trunk meets the ground instead of "growing out
of the ground".
  * The large low branch on the right looks like it should have
cross-section showing at the end - like it's snapped off.
  * Not sure about the bark - the patches are good, but there might just be
a few too many of them.
 * The stone wall is much better - better shape and better colouring - but I
think particularly in the shade of the tree it looks a bit like clay. (Maybe
it's just this LCD I'm viewing it on though!)

Keep 'em comming!!!
Andrew.

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