> You have the camera moving quite a bit,
> which could be effective, but in the beginning,
> when you brought it right up to one of the walking
> things, you really do well to grab the viewer's attention,
> but the red thing eats one of aliens behind that one.
> I think it would have had more impact to eat the one
> that has the viewer's attention.

Good point!

Make the camera start at a distance and just as it gets close.. blamo down
comes the red thing!

Now perhaps it could also then cause some of the other things to pause and
look in fear in that direction?

I like the way the camera shudders with the impact too... :)

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