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Enjoyed your animation. As mentioned by others,
it wasn't obvious that the red thing was eating the
others. You have the camera moving quite a bit,
which could be effective, but in the beginning,
when you brought it right up to one of the walking
things, you really do well to grab the viewer's attention,
but the red thing eats one of aliens behind that one.
I think it would have had more impact to eat the one
that has the viewer's attention.
=Bob=
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