It's nice, but I think it's a bit too clean.
The book is too flat. Maybe you can lift
one or two pages a bit up.

The other thing is, the centered view is
sometimes good, but here I would prefer
another point of view - more perspective.
Try a position a bit lower and perhaps
from the right side. Then the horizon should
be under the middle of the image.

And finally I think that the reflection of the
lamp is a bit too strong.

Just a few thoughts. Think about.

Greetz
Flo

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