You should change her pose. To me she looks more surprised, like the phone
is suddenly ringing, than someone who's lonely.
Maybe it's because she is too straight in the back..
IMHO you'd want a more "I've given up" pose.
Maybe sitting resting her head in her hands or something.
Perhaps change the time of day to evening to give a more
gloomy feeling. Maybe rain on the windows?


/Stefan

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"James Taylor" <jim### [at] blueyondercouk> wrote in message
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> Hi all,
>
> I'm just after a few comments on my WIP for the current IRTC round.
>
> There's still a few details that need to be ironed out...after a couple of
> weeks work, I'm not sure that I like the image, in the sense that it just
> looks plain bad.
>
> anyway comments on improvements would be appreciated
>
> thanks
> jim
>
>
>

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