Marc Jacquier wrote:
> Or is in an other plane of reality so he can't more interact with ours
> then is veeeeeery alone

  No, he is simply wondering who done that hole on the thelephone. :)

  Great work, Txemi. I agree with others about the lighting and some of the 
textures.  Adding some irregularities to the sidewalk will help also.

  I specially agree with the comment about the bad placement of the 
telephone box (and the trash container), just in front of someone's door.  
I will suggest to move the door instead the telephone.... but it's 
difficult to say, given the composition. Try perhaps different arrangements 
of the objects, to find one more interesting.

  There is still a little detail: there seems there are not glass sheets on 
the box. They must be there, because the interior glass reflection is 
visible. There is something in front of the scene, behind the camera?

-- 
Jaime Vives Piqueres

La Persistencia de la Ignorancia
http://www.ignorancia.org

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