> Perhaps I hadn't mentioned it, but I do like the image.

I gather that constructive criticism is mostly a point of view
which conveys that the overall image does look acceptable,
but that some minor/major changes might be of better effect.
Simply put: Thanks! :-)

> I didn't understand this from what I saw. Sorry, my fault.
> Still, I'm not sure that it adds anything to the image, but
> that's just my blurred view.

You know, art always has this problem that some are thinking:
What the f***!? (although you didn't sound THAT frustrated),
and there's always this issue about what the artist wants to
say vs. what a viewer thinks.
Nontheless, was a nice and short discussion, well on-topic, so
its all some just very human. :-)

Regards,

Tim

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Tim Nikias
Homepage: http://www.digitaltwilight.de/no_lights/index.html
Email: Tim### [at] gmxde

"Remco de Korte" <rem### [at] onwijscom> schrieb im Newsbeitrag
news:3D6028B6.272E611E@onwijs.com...
> Tim Nikias wrote:
> >
> > How about this:
> > He began writing the note, trashed it, added a sentence,
> > trashed it again, added the last note, threw pen away,
> > took pills while sobbing (thus the the few remaining pills,
> > he dropped them), put the glass on the note, so that it won't
> > fly away.
> > I wasn't too comfortable with the idea that he just writes his
> > note and leaves, so I made the paper wrinkled, as if he
> > was pondering about this a long time, even though some lines
> > were already written.
> > Perhaps if I'd made the first line a little more gray, rather
> > than black, it would appear to be older, bleached out,
> > and then everything would fit?
> >
> > Simply put, I didn't want this image to be purely realistic,
> > but also a little desolate, untidy. The person is just lost
> > in chaos.
> > Its meant to be a little more expressionistic rather than 100%
> > realistic.
> >
>
>
> I didn't understand this from what I saw. Sorry, my fault.
> Still, I'm not sure that it adds anything to the image, but
> that's just my blurred view.
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Remco

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