That's beautiful! *Very* pretty.

Two things strike me as odd or needing improvement:

1. when time speeds up after the slowdown, it seems to speed up too slowly.
If you're going for the matrix effect, I'd have it return to normal speed
over a *much* shorter period of real time.

2. The smoke trail disappears too quickly, IMO. I think the clouds need to
become larger and more invisible before fading away so quickly, otherwise it
creates a strange effect when they disappear at the same speed and direction
as they appeared in. Maybe you preferred this way to avoid long render
times.

 - Slime
[ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]

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