> This is the first scene where you can see the layout.
>
> Two male hands, treasuring something very special:
> the love of a woman (depicted by a woman with a
> glowing heart).
>
> I'm not statisfied with the image yet, this is just
> a first try at the composition to have a base for trials
> and tests.
>
> Suggestions? Comments? Criticism?

I really like this idea. On my screen it looks much better, IMHO, if you
increas the contrast a bit. One suggestion about the hands. The way it looks
now it looks like the hands could be charishing the woman, but it also looks
like they are trying to catch her like an insect:-) Perhaps if you placed
them in a cupping motion under here.

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