Seems a little too bright. Maybe you should darken it and add radiosity?

The snow seems to look too much like noise, and too uniform in size, I
think. It almost looks like a repeated pattern against the sky. And the
lamppost could use some work.

On the other hand, there's a high level of detail, which is good. The scene
is well laid out, too. Nice job so far.

- Slime
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