"Tony[B]" <ben### [at] catholicorg> wrote :
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> 3) More tiny butterflies fluttering about the flowers, not near the
camera.

    Agree. I almost mentioned that. It would provide a continuity of scale
that might make other things work. I might also get rid of the apparently
butterfly-sized Eagle.

> 7) No wolf.

    Agree. Unless there is a story-telling reason for the wolf, it really
pulls the eye away from some other good things and ends up with me looking
at a less detailed part of the image.

    All in all, I would remove the man-made clutter, the eye drawing wolf
and perspective defeating eagle, and the Duck Rocks.

    ...unless, as I said, there are story-telling reasons for having them
there.

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