The lighting looks *much* more realistic to me. Now the only things that
strike me are:

1. the groove on the desk... seems like it should be deeper, or there should
be more of them, or it shouldn't be there at all
2. a little bit of land and a shoreline and maybe some rocks outside the
window would be good, so it doesn't look like the house is *right* on the
water
3. the clouds don't look right on the horizon.... i suspect a layered
sky_sphere texture. try a plane instead.
4. consider working on the water texture, it looks sort of plastic-ish,
although i doubt i could do much better.

- Slime
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