My suggestions:

1. put another one or two small objects on the desk, like, someone's glasses
or something.
2. make the moon a bit smaller... unless that would ruin the moon <-> lamp
analogy.
3. if that groove in the desk is just a normal, use a CSG instead, and try
adding a very slight normal map to the whole desk.
4. use a very slight shadowless light somewhere in the room to simulate
radiosity; the upper right of the picture has very non-varied lighting. Try
putting this light somewhere inside or near the world-in-a-glass.
5. Maybe increase the overall lighting some?

Cool image.

- Slime
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