Hi Gail 

 This is getting really interesting as concept, and also artistically. My 
only complains are more for the tech part. I see the shadow parts are too 
dark. Can you put some light on "the other side" of the room to give some 
light filling? It also seems to mee that the point of view is somewhat 
"opressive", too close to the wall (I think someone already mentioned it).

  Good luck!

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Jaime Vives Piqueres

La Persistencia de la Ignorancia
http://www.ignorancia.org

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