Speaking strictly as an art student, the background is taking the attention
away from all of your beautiful objects.  The antialiasing creates some
strange patterns, and the bright coloring is pretty harsh.  Is there any way
to scale up the pattern on the back wall so that the antialiasing wouldn't
do weird things to the lines?  And maybe darken the wall or make your light
source not shine quite so directly on it.  Great scene otherwise.  Keep up
the good work.

Stephen

"Jim Charter" <jrc### [at] aolcom> wrote in message
news:3C5### [at] aolcom...
> My entry in the previous irtc round was something of a rush job, done
> over about 4 days while on vacation at the end of December.  I think the
>   work may have more potential than what was complete at the time of the
> deadline.  So I have decided to try and complete to a second state.  I
> have made some changes based on comments received in the contest in dome
> cases, and included elements that render times prevented during the
> entry period.  All suggestions on how to make this a better picture are
> welcome.
> -Jim
>


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