I agree with the other comments about the color of the oranges and the
orange flesh being somewhat off.
I also feel the "opened" orange is a bit too cleanly opened and the contents
(I assuming the flesh is from the opened orange) would not have fit through
the opening made in that orange. In fact I have never seen the contents of
an orange come cleanly out of the interior of the skin since they are so
well attached.
The glass container in the background might benefit through the use of
photons.
Despite my comments I think the image is great! It really looks "real" and
solid.
"Jim Charter" <jrc### [at] aol com> wrote in message
news:3C5### [at] aol com...
> My entry in the previous irtc round was something of a rush job, done
> over about 4 days while on vacation at the end of December. I think the
> work may have more potential than what was complete at the time of the
> deadline. So I have decided to try and complete to a second state. I
> have made some changes based on comments received in the contest in dome
> cases, and included elements that render times prevented during the
> entry period. All suggestions on how to make this a better picture are
> welcome.
> -Jim
>
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