I'm sure she's not asking for water ;)
Anyway, I like it.

Some suggestions:
- I would improve the appearence of the clouds. I would make them a little more
*puffy*, maybe using the -stack-of-planes- technique.
- I would increase the contrast of the pic. I mean, the darkest parts IMO should be a
bit darker.
- It would be great if you managed to make some waves come from her body, using an
iso plane instead of simple normals.

Keep up the good work.

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