"David Fontaine" <dav### [at] faricynet> wrote in message
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> Kevin Ellis wrote:
>
> > Thanks, but any chance of some more detailed constructive criticism as
> > something feels a bit wrong and I can't quite put my finger on it?
>
> Really?  Hmm...  I'd guess it has to do with the fog/sky.  (shrug)
>

Thanks. Well I think I've decided that the clouds need to be more
transparent and the grass needs to be a bit greener.

Kev
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