I think the castle looks very good. But I can suggest a few improvements.

The perspective is somehow off. The castle looks small instead of far away.
I don't know how to fix this but maybe taking a look at the scene from above
and checking the scale distances between the objects would help.

A slope map would I think improve the appearance of the mountains. The
mountains are also a little smooth.

The figure's staff is in front of a shadow and therefore hard for me to see.

Just my opinion for what it's worth.
 -Shay



Gail Shaw <gsh### [at] monotixcoza> wrote in message
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> Version 2
>
> I moved the light source to the right (Note to self: Never
> put the main light behind the camera unless there is a very good
> reason) and added some details in the foreground.
>
> The figure is a poser model and the clothing is a 3ds import
> from http://www.stewstras.net/baument/downloads.htm
>
> The snow on the flagpole was done with a the snow_blobs
> macro (Who wrote that?)
>
> Flag created with cloth simulator 0.4.0
>
> I originally intended this scene for the irtc, but I don't
> think I'm going to enter it.
>
> Comments?
>
> Gail
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