Tek <tek### [at] evilsuperbraincom> wrote:

>> Enjoy, and comment!

> To be honest I much prefered Take 11! This version seems to have lost the
> sense of space and depth. The little flying things shooting lasers around
> don't seem appropriate. I realise it's a fort and so built for battle, but I
> liked the tranquility of the earlier versions.

I think I have to agree.  There's something about this one that lost much of
what I liked, and I can't put my finger on what.

I can offer a few specifics though The little guys are cool, but they make
the scene look busy, too much, IMO.  The blimp in front of the tower looks
to be docked, but it's hard to tell how, and it somewhat looks like it's
overlapping part of the tower, which is bad.  The jet flares on the blimps
are ok, but I'm not too fond of those either.  The smudgy fog on the left is
too much, and needs to be toned down some.  The waterfall looks faky from
this angle, and looked much better from higher up, like in some of the other
takes.  

Geoff

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