"Mick Hazelgrove" <mic### [at] mhazelgrovefsnetcouk> wrote:

> Sorry forgot to add the pic, too hasty on the bsend button.
> 

Very moody image. I don't think the overall setting needs any additions,
perhaps some little detail here and there to bring it to life. No clouds, IMHO
they'd make the sky look too busy; the current murky haze is perfect.
As others have said, there should be a little mound under the tree, maybe
grassy, but maybe not.
The water is a bit difficult to make out in this image, but it somehow
seems too clean - it should be muddy.
Lastly, I don't think the tree, esp. the foliage would look so colourful
when viewed against the sun, hasy though it may be. I'd expect to see more
of a shilouette.
Great work, can't wait to see where it goes from here.

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