"H.E. Day" <The### [at] hedayfreeserverscom> wrote in message
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Lovely.

3 crits - the blue flags are too blue (I'm not sure blue is the best base
colour, given the amount of blue in the sky and sea). Secondly, it's hard to
get a sense of scale on the near blimp, since you can't easily tell whether
it's behind or in front of the fortress. Thirdly (and this is very picky),
are those birds at the base of the station? Wouldn't the thrusters and/or
the water preclude them hanging around there?

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