Gail Shaw <gsh### [at] monotixcoza> wrote:


> Wow. That's really nice.

Thanks.

> A couple of nit-picks...

> The green stuff on the tower on the right. If that's supposed to be a result
> of
> stuff coming from the pipe then it's a little too wide at the top. Cone
> shaped
> would probably look better.

It is, or rather it's a parabola, but the top is a little too flattened. 
I'm going to have to tweak it.

> Is the man throwing that glow ball, or just standing watching it. I get
> the impression that it is the latter. If it's supposed to be the former,
> maybe a
> more dramatic posture would be better.

Well, he did throw it, but now he's watching it fall. ;)  A drammatic pose
would go against the mood I'm going for, so I went with something a little
more subtle.


> The smoke looks great, but I'm not sure about the speckly background.
> What's it supposed to be?

Abstract mainly. :/  I don't want the picture to feel entirely real.

Geoff

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