"H.E. Day" <The### [at] hedayfreeserverscom> wrote :
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> Comments?  Enjoy!

    I agree that two implies hundreds, and the station loses it's
incongruity and uniqueness. The falls are a little grainy but other-wise I
would replace the second station with almost anything else and then call it
finished.

    Maybe a fleet of supply ships coming in at about 300 ft? Or a close up
of a ship leaving? Anything occupying about the same visual space would do,
but something that adds to the story would be best.

    What's the story?

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