"Greg M. Johnson" wrote:
> 
> I'm using my new Bravenet site for dribbleware improvements
> http://gregjohn.bravepages.com/index.html
> and I just posted one with jive.
> 
> (FWIW my povray  IRTC's are compiled at:
> http://www.geocities.com/pterandon/anims.html )

I had a look and it looks great! I'd like to see it from another angle,
so I can give more criticism ;)
I saw you had the shoulders swaying, might even be a bit more, do the
hips sway as well.
Oh, and perhaps you could add some "bounce".

I hope you don't take these remarks the wrong way, I really appreciate
(or more precisely: envy) your work. I wish I could do such stuff and
I'm just coming up with things I'd try to add if it were my
models/animations.

And, for what it's worth, the text panel you had in a previous version,
which covered most of the walking figure, I figured it was to keep focus
on the feet, but I thought it was funny nonetheless. You could use the
gag in a full animation (as if you hadn't already planned to).

Cheers!

Remco

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