i agree!
but i think a solution could be to put the wall behind the tree!
the shadows just need some fill lighting

nice tree Tom!

Jim Charter wrote:

> What I liked best was the tangle of branches and the tactility of the 
> bark.  Both those elements are downplayed in the second version.  I 
> think the leaves silhouette could take on some poignancy against the 
> sky, but the wall is crowding the scene somehow.  Maybe if the wall 
> was lower or the tree partially dead?
>

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